I miss u by every passing day and hour...
Love gets stronger and
longing gets longer,
Together we embarked upon
a fabled timeless journey,
The journey ended where the U turns starts and time gallops...
And left the soul to
caress the memories, my body couldn't adore
I loved you with all my
might that am parched inside
I loathe my soul for
abandoning me, and envy for it has you besides
Now, when I look behind,
I smile with a sense of warmth
The pain will never
cease nor I ll miss you any less
As, I left all my
precious with you
You carrying me bottled inside...
I am a Whiskey
bottle,


Superb Work...with good rhythm and depth in feelings :) Keep writing
ReplyDeleteYeah i will for sure but I dont write as spontaneously like you do. Usually I never like to rhyme my poetry, and bilv me this is the most cheesy poem I have ever written... :P
ReplyDeleteThe title is awesome
ReplyDeleteThe title is not given by me ..sorry I am influenced by a song called whiskey lullaby ...have u heard it?
ReplyDeleteWell ..I did:)!!...by d way R U Jenny:d??!! LOL..very nice..keep it up:)!!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much ... and no I can never be jenny..she is out of this world...
ReplyDeleteu too dear:)..u dnt knw!!
ReplyDeletewhiskey lullaby toh konodin suni nih toh :)
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