Thursday, September 8, 2011

Whiskey Lullaby



I miss u by every passing day and hour...
Love gets stronger and longing gets longer,
Together we embarked upon a fabled timeless journey,
The journey ended where the U turns starts and time gallops...

I dragged my body back with great difficulty to a known shore
And left the soul to caress the memories, my body couldn't adore
I loved you with all my might that am parched inside
I loathe my soul for abandoning me, and envy for it has you besides

Now, when I look behind, I smile with a sense of warmth
The pain will never cease nor I ll miss you any less
As, I left all my precious with you 
You carrying me bottled inside...
I am a Whiskey bottle, 
You will find me always in the shopping aisle...


8 comments:

  1. Superb Work...with good rhythm and depth in feelings :) Keep writing

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  2. Yeah i will for sure but I dont write as spontaneously like you do. Usually I never like to rhyme my poetry, and bilv me this is the most cheesy poem I have ever written... :P

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  3. The title is not given by me ..sorry I am influenced by a song called whiskey lullaby ...have u heard it?

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  4. Well ..I did:)!!...by d way R U Jenny:d??!! LOL..very nice..keep it up:)!!

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  5. Thank you so much ... and no I can never be jenny..she is out of this world...

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  6. whiskey lullaby toh konodin suni nih toh :)

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